🔥 1. Nâng cấp câu nêu ý kiến

Band 5.0:
➡️ I think people should recycle more.

Band 6.5:
✔️ I strongly believe that encouraging people to recycle more is essential for protecting the environment.

🔥 2. Nâng cấp câu giải thích

Band 5.0:
➡️ It is good for students.

Band 6.5:
✔️ This approach is highly beneficial for students as it helps them develop critical thinking and independent learning skills.

🔥 3. Nâng cấp câu đưa ví dụ

Band 5.0:
➡️ For example, children use phones a lot.

Band 6.5:
✔️ For instance, many children spend several hours a day on smartphones, which significantly affects their concentration.

🔥 4. Nâng cấp câu so sánh

Band 5.0:
➡️ Online learning is better.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Online learning can be more flexible and convenient compared to traditional classroom methods.

🔥 5. Nâng cấp câu nêu kết quả

Band 5.0:
➡️ They become tired.

Band 6.5:
✔️ As a result, many students find themselves mentally exhausted after long school hours.

🔥 6. Mở rộng ý bằng mệnh đề quan hệ

Band 5.0:
➡️ Many people buy fast food.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Many people, who often have busy schedules, tend to buy fast food instead of cooking at home.

🔥 7. Dùng mệnh đề nhượng bộ (Although/Even though)

Band 5.0:
➡️ The Internet is useful but dangerous.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Although the Internet is extremely useful, it also poses several risks to young users.

🔥 8. Câu điều kiện loại 1 nâng cấp

Band 5.0:
➡️ If people exercise, they will be healthier.

Band 6.5:
✔️ If people make regular exercise a habit, their overall health will improve significantly.

🔥 9. Câu bị động học thuật

Band 5.0:
➡️ People produce a lot of waste.

Band 6.5:
✔️ A large amount of waste is produced every day, especially in urban areas.

🔥 10. Cấu trúc để nhấn mạnh

Band 5.0:
➡️ Technology changes our life.

Band 6.5:
✔️ It is technology that has dramatically transformed our daily lives.

🔥 11. Câu phân tích 2 chiều (On the one hand…)

Band 5.0:
➡️ Smartphones are good but also bad.

Band 6.5:
✔️ On the one hand, smartphones provide instant access to information. On the other hand, they may distract students from studying.

🔥 12. Thể hiện quan điểm một cách linh hoạt

Band 5.0:
➡️ I agree.

Band 6.5:
✔️ To a certain extent, I agree with this idea, especially when considering younger learners.

🔥 13. Diễn đạt nguyên nhân nâng cấp

Band 5.0:
➡️ People are stressed because they work a lot.

Band 6.5:
✔️ People often experience high levels of stress due to their heavy workload and tight deadlines.

🔥 14. Diễn đạt mục đích nâng cấp

Band 5.0:
➡️ Students learn English to get a job.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Many students study English in order to enhance their job opportunities in the future.

🔥 15. Dùng từ nối học thuật

Band 5.0:
➡️ Also, it is expensive.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Moreover, this solution can be extremely costly for low-income families.

🔥 16. Dùng cấu trúc “not only … but also …”

Band 5.0:
➡️ The city is polluted and crowded.

Band 6.5:
✔️ The city is not only polluted but also overcrowded.

🔥 17. Dùng danh từ trừu tượng nâng band

Band 5.0:
➡️ People want to be happy.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Most people seek long-term happiness and life satisfaction.

🔥 18. Dùng collocations

Band 5.0:
➡️ Improve health

Band 6.5:
✔️ maintain a healthy lifestyle / boost physical fitness

🔥 19. Dùng cấu trúc “there is a growing trend”

Band 5.0:
➡️ More people study online.

Band 6.5:
✔️ There is a growing trend of people choosing online learning platforms.

🔥 20. Dùng hedging (giảm độ chắc chắn – phong cách academic)

Band 5.0:
➡️ Phones cause health problems.

Band 6.5:
✔️ Smartphone overuse may contribute to a range of health problems.

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